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Ethan crashed to the ground, his nose exploding on the cold, hard concrete. Their taunts were now a mere echo in the alley way. Yet they still pierced his brain like tiny verbal knives. He winced in pain as he tried to move, his entire right arm covered in blood. He managed to pull himself upright and fell against the ally wall, gasping for air.
He started to calm a little and assess the extent of his injuries. He pulled out a long bandage from his school bag; the whole thing had almost become part of his mundane routine now. He cleaned up his right arm a little to reveal a group
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